Our summers (Part 3)

Hello to all my students,

Here are more of your summer paragraphs. Check these great ones out!

Here's one: 

I went to Canada for three weeks by plane. I went there with my mother, sister and brother to meet my father. My father lives in Toronto near the Toronto airport. He works for Honda there. We stayed at my father’s house, and we went to Niagara Falls, the Wonderland amusement park, the CN Tower and some good old places. At Niagara Falls, I saw the American and Canadian sides. Both falls were so powerful. There were many people there too. I walked also the souvenir streets, and it was interesting. At Wonderland, the roller coaster was fun. I was saturated by it! I ate a big pizza too.

I lived in Toronto when I was little, and I visited the kindergarten and elementary school I went to. It was good and old, but I didn’t want to spend so much time there. I saw my old house too, but I couldn’t see my old neighbors. I really wanted to see them. My house had became a little dirty. I ate more pizza, hotdogs, and hamburgers at The Keg, a restaurant. We ate steak too. It was tender and delicious, but expensive. I liked it.

I felt Toronto’s temperature was colder than Tokyo, but I enjoyed this summer.

Great! Now how about this:

I enjoyed my summer vacation. I went to Disneyland with my friends. I rode on the roller coaster. It was very fun, and after I ate popcorn, pumpkin ice cream and other delicious food, so I was very happy. We enjoyed the electrical parade too. The beautiful lights were so bright in the dark night. We bought many souvenirs, like cookies for my family, and some character goods for my sister. My family were very pleased, and I become happy when I brought these to them.

We enjoyed ourselves very much, and we promised ourselves that we would come again.

Check this one out too!

I went to Aomori with my family by car. It was very long trip that took my father eight hours to drive.

Aomori was very hot, but my grandparents were very fine. They have a very large field which we enjoyed. 

The Aomori beaches are very beautiful and very clean. The first day we played around there. There were many different kinds of sea food, such as hotate, ikura, uni, salmon and so on.  I ate some delicious food. It was very fun.

Look at this one:

Most of my summer vacation was made up of club activities. I belong to cheerleading club, so I went to training camp three times. The training camp was very hard but the bond with my friends in the club deepened. Through this camp, my dance improved and my skill increased. We all had a barbecue and lit fireworks together. 

I also went to Sendai in August to do some volunteer work. I helped to encourage people in the stricken area and cultivated some oysters. After, I went to Niigata and did some more cheerleading practice. Overall, I was able to have many experiences in my summer vacation. They were both fun and serious, but I had a good time. 

There are still some of you who haven't sent me your paragraphs. Keep them coming in! I'll look forward to posting them here. 

Until then, see you soon!