Tuesday, January 19, 2016

White Rooms and Secret Stories (Part 4)

Hello again!



As promised, here's Part 4 of this ongoing series, White Rooms and Secret Stories 

Now check out this next story! 

When the red sun sets behind the earth, I was in the white mysterious room. This white room has one window, I could see the beautiful sunset in the window. I could not remember why I am in the room. There were not furniture in the mysterious room, but there were white door and a sleeping white tiger. I afraid to be attacked awaked white Tiger, so went to close to the white door and went out the room. My heart beats strongly, but I could go out the white room before it happen anything.

The next room was bathroom. There were a woman’s silhouette in the door of the bathroom, it seemed that she taking a shower. I closed a curtain and waiting her. After she finished take a shower, she appeared from the shower room. She that has black hair and eyes was very beautiful woman. When I saw her, I remembered all. She said, ‘Oh, my dear. Did you remember me?’ ‘Yes, my dear. This house is your house and you are my girlfriend!’ I replied. ‘You and I boarded an airplane to travel and intended to hold a wedding ceremony in the destination. But the airplane caused engine trouble. I thought we will die, but you never gave up and helped me. Though you had got rid of your memory for the accident, I always thank you and always love you’ she said. ‘I will marry you’ I kissed her. Then, we held our marriage ceremony and lived happily.

That was a great one! Now the next two are a little longer, and I've saved them for the last because they're longer - and good! Here's the first one: 

Today, a couple was married. They first met after 5 years ago, they also started to live in the same house together. And then, they have been walking on the way of the life. After one month, they would be going to go to the honeymoon. They rode a plan for another country. This is why amazing story started the beginning. There is a problem in their stayed a lodging. But only one knows it. Who is this lodging’s the master. That problem would be that they are seeing after.

A man of the couple found a white door behind a gray curtain. That was closed by a lock. He wondered that and he asked the lodging’s master. But he only answered “I can’t tell you that. But if you want to know that, open the white door with this key and look at the inside!” A man heard that and got the key from the master. And then, he went to front of the door. He opened it, when he looked at the interior of the room. There was a bathroom. But there was nothing the light. He felt nothing for it. Then the same time, the sun was starting to grow dark. It was a red color then. A woman of the couple was on a street. A town was pointed a color of a red by the sunlight. A man saw a small green the light, it was growing bigger little by little in the bathroom. When the green light was full in the door, a shadow suddenly appeared! He was very surprised and came back to out as soon as he flied. And then, he closed hurry up the white door.

He asked the master again after that. He answered, “That’s a ghost, however, it was a usually woman at the first. She made a contact to be beautiful with a devil as a white beast. That devil seems to have said ‘If you paid your soul, I’ll give you beauty!’ And then, she paid her soul and got the beauty like this picture…” The master showed a picture for me. There was a beautiful woman as if I’ll be falling love her at the moment when I saw it. “But, she became a not human the same as. Now, she is a dead body and she is afflicted with nothing a soul state…”

A man who had heard the story of all went out the lodging with his wife the next day. He talked her all things to disappeared that fear. And then, she said she didn’t know those and never see a white door. He was surprised it and his fear were bigger than after.

However, if one saw the white door, that one will die near future. This fact is not known anybody.

How about that? Now here's the last story - what do you think of it? 

I want to introduce my best friend’s funny story.

In the evening of one day, my friend and his wife caught train. Because they wanted to go to an airport to travel abroad. She had black hair and eyes. Also she often wore cloths of the same color. The sun set down when they finished the procedures for embarkation, rode on it and took their seats. He could see the moon in the night sky. When they arrived their destination, they walked around in the city near the airport to enjoy the sightseeing. After it finished, they went to the zoo.

This zoo was famous that a white tiger came recently and it was the sluggardly tiger. Because it always kept sleeping on the ground. No matter what happens, it doesn’t get up. But the first accident happened! It began to growl. It looked fear to them. People thought it and came in front of the cage. They left with confusion. They tried to calm their-self and went to the restroom. So they couldn’t notice that second accident happened. A person found that he or she didn’t reflect in the mirror. A person amazed and spoke loudly! They ran away from zoo.

In addition they noticed that the time is coming soon to check into a hotel. They could arrive at the hotel witch stay for a few days. They finished checking it and went to their room. He wanted to take a bath early. He asked her permission. She understood it so he entered the bathroom. About ten minutes later, he found that someone was scratched the door of the bathroom when he turned off the shower. He called my wife’s name with his loud voice after opened grey curtain, but there was no answer. He looked back. Just on the moment two arms were thrust on the door!

He screamed in alarm in spite of his-self! Then she opened the door with laughing. She said. ”Did you surprise?” She didn’t stop it still now. “Sure! I thought that an alien invaded this bathroom! ”I retorted strongly. Then she said with amazement. “It’s a very funny story. An alien was afraid of the other aliens!” She left here. He took a shower again to warm up his body. We must be careful more. This travel just began. He swore it in his mind.

What a story! I hope to collect more as I go along. 

It's been a pleasure being your teacher this year. I hope I have given you all opportunities to write. I believe all of you can go on to become great writers of English. Good luck to you in your futures. Don't stop writing!

Have a great spring break! I hope I can see some of you around on campus in April. 


Take care! 

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White Rooms and Secret Stories (Part 3)

Hello to all of you!



How are you? Today, for our final meeting, I'd like to show you some more samples of writing for our collection of great student stories of unusual, strange, interesting or funny stories.

I call this collection White Rooms and Secret Stories. You will see on the title of the blogpost that I also call it Part 3. That's because I did a Part 1 and Part 2 last year, with my writing students then. Now, I'm doing this with you this year!

If you would like to see Part 1, click here. For Part 2, click here

Here's the first story:


I had a strange dream one night. I saw a white tiger and it said me ‘If you trip to California, you can get wonderful experience.’ I woke up and thought. I didn’t know why, I wanted to go to California by white tiger’s word. I made sure that how much did I have money. I had money enough and decided to trip to California.

Early in the morning, I left Japan for California by plane. It took about 10 hours. I arrived at there in the evening. I saw setting sun and I went to the hotel. Before I went to the hotel, I saw a beautiful woman. She lives in California and she acted as my guide. I went home for the present. I closed thick curtains and went to bed.

I got up at 5 a.m. Outside is still dark. I went to the restroom after I gave a big yawn, but I saw a strange silhouette. It was nearly paralyzed with terror. The door opened, then I shouted. I opened my eyes. There is a beautiful woman and she was laughing. She wants to go to see sun rise with me. I felt relieved. I went many place with her. We made friends.


Two years later, we fell in love and we got married. Then I remembered a white tiger. I was convinced that tiger’s word is this wonderful experience. Thanks to white tiger. And thanks a great wonderful dream for me.

Incredible! Now how about this one:

When the woman woke up, she was in white. She couldn’t understand what happened to her. She sat up slowly and looked around her around. She was in the empty small room.  Only there was a white door on the wall. ‘Where am I now?’ she thought. She began to search her mind for memories.

The woman’s name is Kate. She married her boyfriend Edward last weekend. Edward was promoted to her husband. They were very happy. Then they would go to Hawaii on a honeymoon. Few weeks later, they got into the airplane with smiles on their faces.

‘Yes, I remembered. We were in the airplane.’ she breathed deeply. ‘Why am I here?’ At that time, a gray curtain appeared in front of her. It swung in the wind. It looked like it guided her beyond the curtain. She walked to the curtain and ducked under it. There was a big white tiger! He was so powerful but strangely enough Kate didn’t afraid of him. ‘Where are we? Who are you?’ Kate asked him. The tiger didn’t answer. He walked to her slowly and kissed her hair. Then, she blacked out.


She woke up. ‘Kate!’ Edward called her. ‘Kate, we arrived!’ She was sitting on the seat of the airplane. Edward was sitting next to her. They arrived in Hawaii. She replied to him and looked out of the window. She could see a beautiful sunset. ‘Was it a dream?’ she thought. ‘It was a very strange dream. But I’m so happy now! Thanks for your kindness, great tiger.’ She smiled happily, and got off the airplane after her husband.

Now that's a story! Now take a look at this one:

In the evening, you were at the station. You were very tired and wanted to go home soon. After you got home, you went to bed soon because you couldn’t sleep well last night.

In your dream, you opened a white door in front of you. When you opened it, strangers were holding a wedding. Everyone looked happy. Suddenly, they looked at you. You run away there. Then, they followed you. You were afraid of them. You hid behind curtain in a big building before they found you. If you were found by them, you expected that you couldn’t come back home. So, you didn’t want to be found by them. Fortunately, they couldn’t find you.

When you woke up, it was dark. You thought it was strange dream. However, it happened more strange things. In the next morning, you watched drama. It is same story which dreamed last night. It was very fantastic thing.

Short but powerful! How about this next one? 

Vivid scenery only appears before the morning sun rises high. After that, the world steadily filled with solid black and white. You would see the state that the tinge of red vanishing quickly from the sky. The colors exist in the world are only black and white. You can see a black airplane going through dark sky. I know you would be panicked, but to recover your temper is important thing.

You can see the world filled with black and white. When you see a tiger, you must notice that the tiger lives in this world is not yellow and black but white and black. Or as you go to a wedding reception, you would meet a couple in black and white clothes. You cannot escape from the room filled with only black and white. Do you think why this world is filled with black and white? I can tell you the reason. Sorrow in the mind of livings in this world makes them white and black. Now you can see yourself reflected in the mirror. You see? You are in a black and white shirt.

Very vivid! Now how about this:

Sarah and Tom live in New York. They came to Tokyo to hold their wedding ceremony. They came by plane. It took 8 hours from New York to Tokyo. They were so tired. They stayed at an expensive hotel in Shinjuku that was so clean. They could see the beautiful sunset from their room, and They thought it was suitable for the day before their wedding ceremony. They were satisfied with the sunset and went to bed early because they were so tired from their long trip.

In the middle of that night, they heard a strange noise. They woke up and looked around. Sarah found a curtain that appeared during they are sleeping. She opened it then there was a white door. They were surprised and opened it. When they did, there was a tiger that was roared. They were scared and closed the door quickly. A few minutes later, it became quiet, so they opened the door again. There wasn’t the tiger. The place changed to bathroom. They were relieved because the tiger disappeared. But then, they saw a shadow of women who they don’t know. They were so flustered and closed the door strong. They couldn’t sleep that night. And morning came.

That day was their wedding ceremony day. Last night’s happening was so fearful and they had never experienced such a happening. But they had spent special time in the wedding ceremony.        

Wow! Now how about that! 

Now - leave a comment in the comments section! 

There's more! My next post will be Part 3 - so check it out! 


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