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This is a collection of writing about exceptional people that my great writing students here at Daito Bunka have put together. I have collected them into a small volume I hope everyone who reads it will enjoy. This collection might be small, but the people that the students have written about are big – and the students themselves are big for writing what they have.
For all my students – this is for you!
This is Part 1 of this collection.
People in our families
The people of our own families inspire
us and give us great models for us to live by. They move us in ways we have
difficulty saying because they are always there, always a part of our lives,
and their feelings are deep for us. They do many things for us, big and small
alike. Here are some thoughts about how special they can be.
My father is a hard worker. His personality is tender, hard
and honest. He looks serious, always knitting his eyebrows, and has short black
hair. His hobby is watch cars, soccer and play golf. He is working for about 30
years. He goes to work early and come back home lately. On the weekend, he
looks tired, but he always spends time with us. So I love him and I respect
him.
My exceptional person is my mother. She is very kind, and
she supports my father.
She loves animals and children. She likes listening to music
like me. And she is funny. She is positive. I like the dishes that she cooks.
For example, I like her pancakes. It is very delicious. So I want to eat them
all the time. She looks good with short hair too. Everyone likes her. Of
course, my family loves her.
My exceptional people are my parents. My mother is doing
housework and she is working part time job too. It is very hard, but she never
says complaint in the presence of a child. I always talk her when have a matter
causing. My father is a self-employed person. His work is very hard and tired.
But, he is working for us every day. My parents always come in on my side in
the end and to help. They think about children in the very first. So I thank
them and respect. I want to become parent like them in the future.
My father is kind to anyone and is loved. Because I was
educated strictly when I was small, I disliked him. But I understood that all
the strictness was for me. He is active in local government. He does so much,
but he supports me. He supports me anytime. Therefore I call him a superman. I
want to become somebody like him, loved by everyone.
My parents reduce my burden a lot so they are
special for me! They are happy to do housework - for example, cooking,
dishwashing, and doing laundry. If I live alone, I have to do all things by
myself! Fortunately, I live with my family. They work long hours every day
six days a week but they take Mondays off. They are sometimes strict for things
like to get up late and spend too much money.
Sometimes they take my sister and me
somewhere, for example Hakone, Nikko or Tokyo. I enjoy going to famous place with
my family, like the Hakone Chokoku-no-mori museum, the Nikko Toshogun, and in
Tokyo, Tokyo Tower and Odaiba. So I respect them very much!
My older brother Shota is who I look up to. He was
enthusiastic about cars for as long as I can remember. Now, he studies at
university as a maechanical engineering major and devotes himself to
experimenting with cars. I think he was very honest when he was a child, so I
believe him every time. With this great effort, he got a job at Toyota.
My exceptional person is my mother because she is very kind
to us and does her best every day. She is very busy with work every day, but
she is taking care of us. My family is strong in personality and she brings
them all together. When I am troubled, she hears my story and feels with me. So
I love her.
I respect my mother the best. She does
a lot of housework after she comes back home from work.
She does it even if she is tired. I started to live alone in this spring
and I found that housework is very hard and difficult for me. So I cannot do it
when I am tired. She always makes us amused too, and she cheers me up when I am
sad. She is perfect person I have ever met. I want to be like her in the
future.
My exceptional person is my mother. My mother is very
strict. I was not very good in club, so it bad to my mother. But she encouraged
and supported me before than anyone more. But I was not even grateful
to mother. I hung in there even if it was hard. Favorite phrase of my mother is
“please live healthily.” So I think I would like to return the favor even a
little to my mother. Therefore I work so hard to the college life now. Someday,
I want to help someone like my mother.
An exceptional person is my mother. She is very good at
cooking. Her dishes are more delicious than mine. She and my father have been
married for 20 years. I want to get along well in there, too. I thank her very
much because they greatly brought me up. I want to become the parent whom a
daughter is brought up into magnificently. Therefore I respect my mother.
My older brother’s looks are tall, with natural curls, fair
skin, narrow eyes, and is wearing glasses. His personality is positive, gentle,
a hard worker, an economizer, cautious, placid, a kind person and a supporter.
He is highly focused. His hobby is guitar. His skills are average, but he tries
hard. His after school job is a cram school teacher. He teaches English. He
teaches me too. So I think he is exceptional.
My parents divorced about 16 years ago, but I have not
passed an inconvenient life like not being able to go shopping with my friends
or enter the university. I owe to my mother that I can pass a normal life,
because my mother worked for me. While I have an older sister who entered the
graduate school, so it costs a lot of money, my mother doesn’t whine. Rather
she always worries about us.
If I will have a family, I want to be like my mother that
works for her family and makes her children happy.
My sister is eleven years old. She is an elementary school
student. She doesn’t come to me about her student problem. She enjoys her
school. Her personality is active and cheerful. Her looks are tiny but so cute.
She is good at sports because she runs fast and is strong too. She is a good
soccer player. She belongs to the junior soccer team. This team sometimes goes
to play soccer for many places and she is active there. She goes to learn
hip-hop. So she dances well. My sister and I don’t quarrel. We often watch TV.
I sometimes teach things to her. My sister and I sometimes go eat dinner with
my family. We often eat sushi. She is very important people for my friend.
I respect my father because he has a neat personality. He
works very hard every day. His brown hair and glasses are very cool. And he
helped me with problems when I was in high school. For example when I worried,
he gave advice. So I got warm feelings from him and I was able to grow until
now, thanks to him. He likes golf, so if I become a golf player, I want to play
golf with him. I like him and I want to become like him.
Sachiko is my mother. She balances a part-time job with
housework. She is busy every day, but she makes time to talk about things with
us a lot. I talk with her and she knows how to laugh and be fun every day. I
love her for all the things she does and dream of my becoming a mother like her
someday.
My father is the one I respect the
most. He is kindly for me since I was a child. His job is as a public officer
and working in fire station for twenty years. He is good at sports, and his
hobby is running. I think he looks thin. Now, I often talk with him in my home.
He cooks well too. He is a precious person in my life.
The
people we meet and develop connections and relationships with outside our
families, like friends, teachers, and classmates, have a great impact on us. Here
are some thoughts on these unique and interesting people, and how they touch
our lives.
I respect to the teacher when I was
child. Because he taught me to common sense and some play. For example, he
taught me to soccer. Teacher was good to soccer and taught me carefully. So I
liked to soccer. His personality was positive and honest. He did not lie in
front of us. We affected him and we didn’t lie too. I meet teacher. He enjoys
talking now. When I become an adult, I want to be a man to be proud like him.
My exceptional person is Ogura Shinsaku. He is a high school
teacher and my wind orchestra conductor. Before he became a teacher, he was a
chorus conductor. Many students loved him because he was very interesting and
awesome for everybody. He helped me when I was difficult to play the oboe. He
was my emotional mainstay. So he is my exceptional person.
I respect my friend of my high school days. He was greatly
honored by the many people. He always was serious for everything. He belonged
to soccer club and practiced very hard. For instance he got up at 5:00, arrived
at our school and ran around our school every morning in spite of he have
practice after school. He had never missed his morning training. If I am he,
probably I’m tired of morning training because I have to practice after school.
Then he usually prepared for class after finish his training. So I think his
schedule was very busy. I couldn’t imitate his daily routine.
Then he has a lot of friends because he was very friendly
and gentle. So I respect him and want to model my life after him.
My respected person is teacher of my junior high school. She
was a person who very bright and tender. For example, she always guided the
students when they were in trouble. Since she was always smiling, we felt more
at ease.
Furthermore, she was a challenger. She participated in an
athletic meet with students, even running the marathon. She also participated
in a singing contest and appeared on TV. She is still the number one teacher
for me even now!
I respect my cram school teacher. He
was kindly and reliable. Now, I still often go to meet him and talk about
various things. When I was a junior high school student, he taught me English,
history and Japanese. His teaching was plain and interesting, so I was easy to
understand him. He advised me how to study
English. I practiced it and took high score in English tests. Thanks to meeting
him, I came to like English. That is why I respect him!
My exceptional person is an office worker in cram school of
my working place. The place name is Rinkai seminar. Everyone called her
“Chansan,” but she is Japanese. She looks madam and brown. She was used to
secretary. So she is very steady and everyone relies her on. Of course me too.
Many students and teachers love her. Though she does not get money, she still
works overtime because she always thinks about students. If I am same her
situation, I never do it. And she supports me for my dream. For example, she
negotiated to get to know to work part-time in my place where I wanted to work
in the future. After all, I can’t work there, but I deeply appreciated to her.
She has four people in her family with her husband, daughter, and son. She is housewife. Her daughter was good basketball manager. She guided an interscholastic athletic meet for basketball player. Therefore many offers came to her from the company. Chansan’s son is good basketball player. He participated in an international athletic meet. I think that after all it is her power that was brought up by such children. I want to become a wonderful person being like her sometime.
She has four people in her family with her husband, daughter, and son. She is housewife. Her daughter was good basketball manager. She guided an interscholastic athletic meet for basketball player. Therefore many offers came to her from the company. Chansan’s son is good basketball player. He participated in an international athletic meet. I think that after all it is her power that was brought up by such children. I want to become a wonderful person being like her sometime.
I respect my teacher when I was junior high. His name is
Akihiko Kurushima. He was my tennis club teacher. He was very strict about
manners and practice, so my club was very strict, but it was his affection for
us that we could learn about manners. When I graduated from junior high, I knew
about that. He was strict out of love, and he told us why people should keep
manners. So I respect him.
The person whom I respect is my friend Kaede Suehiro. She is a person from Kansai who came over to Kanto to study. She is an always-spirited girl. She loves people very much and is generous. She tells people immediately what she thinks. I do not speak my feelings so clearly, I respect her for her way of life, even though she is still very shy. There is the one side resembling her, so she is my important friend.
The person I respect is my mother. Because she is kind and personable, giving a lot out of herself.For example, she taught swimming to students. Another thing is that she is beautiful. She has great looks with great hair and a great shape, and I respect her consciousness. She got a part-time job at a convenience store six years ago. It is very hard work because my mother deals with many different kinds of people, but she never loses her humor.
I respect my high school homeroom teacher who taught us world history. He was tall, slender, with his glasses and short gray hair. His character was strict, funny, and sometimes kind. His class was very interesting but it's difficult for me to understand, but his advice was precise when I talked with him. This is why I respect him.
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Many people respected his or her family. It is very good and I want to be a person who is respected by my family.
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ReplyDeleteTheir writing are so interesting and clealy. Especially, the writing about their familly is funny. I could read it relaxly.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad! Some of these students you can see walking in the halls of this building every day.
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Her mother is good mother! I forget to feel thank yor mother, so I want to say that.
ReplyDeleteThere are a lot of his hobbies and very enviabel. He continues walking for 30 years, Because I do not have a hobby, it is very enviable. It being goodto respect a parent. I respect parents, too. But I respect my mother, Because my mother works on a holiday.
DeleteI thank her heartily. Thank you!
Her teacher is very nice. I like her.
ReplyDeleteI think there are very good!! I know Kaede Suehiro. I respect her too.
ReplyDeleteHer father is very good!!
ReplyDeleteperfect i like there but i do not understand the words about english , so i need to study english hard ! ok i can fight!
ReplyDeleteI think you don't need to study English so much as you need to use it more, in speaking and writing. The more you use it, the more you will understand. Don't struggle with it! Don't do this with pain or effort. Relax with it and enjoy the language. Read these paragraphs about the important people the students wrote again. You can learn a lot from other students like yourself!
DeleteThese students were not more intelligent or even that much better at English. They worked hard at it and enjoyed writing from their feelings about the important people in their lives. They are not different from you. So read them and you can learn well from them. They are good models for you. Good luck, and take care!
These is very good. I want to write English very well.
ReplyDeleteI was glad to read about many people's important people.
ReplyDeleteThis is very interesting. I like her.
ReplyDeleteAnything is very good because these writing are written simple and clearly.
ReplyDeleteI think simple and clearly is best!
This is very good. I impressed with her.
ReplyDeleteI think their parents are very good because they seemed to be kind and personable. I wish I had like this parents.
ReplyDeleteI think so too.
DeleteHis teacher is very good and I thought he is very kind!
ReplyDeleteI think man who resrect his friend is very good because respecting friend is wonderful. I think I want to have a long time with him if I have friend who like him. I want to have good friend, and I want to be respected by a lot of my friends. I respect him, too. I want to change.
ReplyDeleteYes, I think so too! It is rare and unique to have a good friend like this you can look up to and really respect and admire. So I hope you can make the kind of friendship like this that can go over time and keep for a long time. Thank you for this comment!
DeleteTheir family are so kind and always thinking about them. I respect my family too, especially, I respect my mother who impressed me. And they have so interesting and good teacher, I want to have such a teacher.
ReplyDeleteI thank the first class this morning for their comments! Now, I invite the next class to make their comments too - this time, make them longer! Thank you!
ReplyDeleteYour parents are great. And you and your sisters can become good peaple like your parents.
ReplyDeleteI think your friend of your high school days is a wonderful person.Because your friend practices hard and is friendly. So, I'm moved that story.
ReplyDeleteI'm impacted by the story which about your friend of high school days. He belonged soccer club and I also belonged soccer club. So, I sympathize with him. It shows the person who can do the effort is loved by many person. I thought I wanna be the person who like a him. If I will be the person who like a him, I have to do the effort more than him. So, I will do my best to become more stronger than myself at present.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't agree more! That person has a lot of gaman, and it sounded like he never quit. Great comment!
DeleteI think so... When i was child, my class teacher is very gentle, and the teacher always watch us. And, i think that doing lie is bad, the teacher tell me the thing, so he tell me everything important things. thank you my teacher!!
ReplyDeleteI think this mother is very strong because she never says complaiant. So I wish I want to be this in the future, and I'm moved this story.
ReplyDeleteYes! I think being a mother is the toughest job in the world. How mothers can do what they do and not lose their cool under great stress is incredible to me. Good comment!
DeleteI think her family is very nice. Because she respect her family and Her mother is very busy, but she makes time to talk about things with family a lot. That's really good. I'm very impressed with her family.
ReplyDeleteThere are a lot of his hobbies and very enviabel. He continues walking for 30 years, Because I do not have a hobby, it is very enviable. It being goodto respect a parent. I respect parents, too. But I respect my mother, Because my mother works on a holiday.
ReplyDeleteI thank her heartily. Thank you!
These are very nice. I think very good her parents. I have respect for my parents . Because My parents are very kind.
ReplyDeleteI see that many students respect a their family, friends or teacher. I think their respect persons are very nice people. My family and friends are very kind too. I think that is a very happy!
ReplyDeleteYour family are very good!! Your family are warm. finaly, Your writing are simple so, easy to read and good writing. thank you.
ReplyDeleteThis story is very beautifull. mother is great.I think that anyone respects one`s mother. Mother works and does the housework. For their family, she cook three meals every day. Mother thinks about their family most.Father warks hard, too. I think that their parents are very good person. Their sister is very cute.
ReplyDeleteGreat comment! Mothers are the hardest working people in the world, I think.
ReplyDeleteThis story is deep flavor. Mind caring parents, I think a good relationship!
ReplyDeleteThere are great story. I respect my father and mother too.
ReplyDeleteThe story about your father is so nice. He is hard woker. And my father is hard woker,too. When I was child, my father often played with me. For example, I remenber doing catchball. I want to be like my father.
ReplyDeleteIt's a very good family.I think very good parents.
ReplyDeleteWant to eat I also her mother cooking.
I want to eat is very pancakes.
Their`s parents are very good! It is enviable and just nice parents.
ReplyDeleteThe story is impressive.
ReplyDeleteIt's great that many student had met good teachers. I hope they will teach the things which they learned from their teacher for others.
ReplyDeleteThis story is great. Her mother good. Mother works for a warm home. People who really can be respected. My mom is also a wonderful person. I would like to thank every day.
ReplyDeleteI read the story about youyr father. I have no father now, so really jealous. Your father is so nice. You should appreciate the pains your father.
ReplyDeleteHe is good teacher. I like him too.
ReplyDeleteThis story is nice !! I think very good parents. My family is nice too.
ReplyDeleteThis good story. I also want to be a presence that is respected by my friends and family.
ReplyDeleteok I read ok
ReplyDeleteWhat a great story is. I can`t think about such a feeling. Because, I had a many conplex about my parents. Because, my father was violenced to us recently. So I had hate him for about decide. But, I had a good feeling that the other family`s warm story in my thinking.
ReplyDeleteThere are many beautiful stories. Everyone likes their parents, and that is good. I have never played with my parents, so I am jealous. I do not like my parents, but I respect them.
ReplyDeleteHis father looks great people. It is nice if you could be like his father.
ReplyDeleteHis father is great. If i were him, I would respect his father.
ReplyDeleteYour father is great!! Also my father is great too. He is good tennis coach so his students loves him. I respect him and I want to be a like him.
ReplyDeleteThis story is very good. I like this story. I think family is very important. My father is very honest. I will try to be more honest human.
ReplyDeleteFor attitude wonderful her family. I think that is a very happy.
ReplyDeleteI respect my parents too. I also want to be like a couple parents. This story is good. I become a happy feeling.
ReplyDeleteI'm respect to father. I'm not good at my father, but I will change to Thinking to my father.
ReplyDeleteThis family is beautiful family. My parients is only mother so she is hard worker. I want to help her trouble things by this story.
ReplyDeleteI like this sentence . I look forward to next sentence . what kind of story is the next?
ReplyDeleteI don't know Ogura Shinsaku. But I was also doing a brass band in high school. I respect my teacher too.
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