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Here's the first piece of writing. What do you think of it?
There was a man
in somewhere. He was gentle and funny. One day, he went to one town. The town
was fantastic and wonderful. And the man came across a woman. The woman is very
beautiful. He fell in love, then he told to her. So they went to a café and
they became friendly. But he loved her. When he came home, he thought “I have
to say my mind to her.” And he said “I love you.” She was very surprised, but
she said “Me too.” After nine months, they were married.
The woman lived
40 more years. He was very sad every day. The woman was very important person
for him. He and she didn’t have a child. But they were very happy. So, he
became alone.
One day, he had a dream.
The dream was very happy. This was that they meet first. They were young and
brilliant. He was crying and smiling during dreaming. When he waked up, he felt
happiness. And he looked theirs album. All of pictures were full with
happiness. He couldn’t stop tears. But he heard her voice “Sorry. But I want
you to live a long time. Please, please.” Then he decided to live as much as
possible. So after 10 years, he died silently and his face was very gentle and
happy.
Wow! An incredible and moving ending. Here's another:
One day, there
was a man of one. He is office worker in near big enterprise. He has worry and
anxiety. He walking round the office, and he found the bar. There is the bar in
near office. He went into the bar. The bar had a lot of people. For example,
smoking man, woman drinking liquor, man to make a drink, and man playing the
piano.
He sat in
closer from the door, and he asked liquor. He heard the sound of the piano
while drinking. He was moved by sound of the piano. His sound healed his heart.
He was quiet listening to the worries and troubles. He went to this bar every
day, and he heard the sound of the piano. He was overworked. So, he lost sight
of own. But, he wanted to enjoy the life by his sound of the piano.
He has changed.
He left the job, and he traveled. He went to a lot of country, and he met many
people. He heard their experience. He lived for me until now. But, he is going
to live for other people. He founded the company of volunteers, and he was
success. He began to a new life by his sound of the piano.
Another incredible story! Let's read another:
A
beautiful girl was in a beautiful place. There were a beautiful river,
beautiful flowers, beautiful fruits, and a beautiful lake. It was the most
wonderful and beautiful place in the world. However, there was nobody but her,
and she had thought she had been all alone until she would be dead.
One
day, a boy came into the place. He was an adventurer, so he had wanted to walk
around the world. When he looked around the place, he was surprised. “What a
beautiful view!” he said. As soon as the girl heard the voice, she ran to him,
and they met each other for the first time. “What a beautiful girl.” he said.
They looked at each other, and they fell in love. After that, they spent each
loving day.
When
they had their first kiss, an accident happened. Actually, she had a secret. If
she would kiss someone, the one would be dead. They had never known the secret,
so they kissed each other. Soon, he fell down right there, and she was into a
panic. “What’s happened!” she screamed, but his eyes kept closing. She became
all alone again.
Now that was great! Let's see one more!
When I came to I was in the silent forest. I don't know what brought me here. The big and tall trees surround me and they don't allow me to see the sky. I started walking to find the other creatures, but nothing was found by me.
I wandered in
the forest, but I don’t know how long I wandered. I felt I may get tired, so I
decided to take a break. When I sat down on the ground, I heard any sound. I
tried to find where the sound come from. It was a bird. It flied around me as
if he invite me to somewhere.
Therefore, I followed him. I think I walked so long distance, but I didn’t get
tired. He brought me to the small space where is not surrounded by the trees.
When I came to
I was in noisy station where I used to use to go to the university. I was
surrounded by a lot of people. They were interested in nothing except
themselves and they continued their walking. Then, I understood there are no
change between the silent forest and the noisy station.
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