Showing posts with label The Small Book of Big People. Show all posts
Showing posts with label The Small Book of Big People. Show all posts

Wednesday, June 10, 2020

Writing English A: Writing assignment 1・作文1

Hello!



How are you? Here is our first writing assignment (作文1) - writing about interesting people or places   (面白い人達、場所、位置). 

Choose one (1) of these - writing about an interesting or unique person, or writing about an interesting or unique place. 

I am gathering writing on this topic into two books – one called The Small Book of Big People, about your most interesting or respected people – and another called Places & Traces, about special places and other things that people remember. The best of your writing on these topics could go into these books, so write to the best you can! 

How much to write
I would like you to write as much as you can, because your work may be published (出版した) on both this blog and in The Small Book of Big People and Places & Traces books. I would like to see maybe 2-3 paragraphs' worth of writing – but if you can write more, go for it! I encourage you to write as much as you can.

Task (choose one)
About people 
Who do you think are some interesting or special people in Japan or the world today?  What are they famous for? You can write about people you know such as your mother or father, brother or sister, or a best friend. 

When you write about a person, include this information:
  • What they look like
  • How they dress (if they have a unique fashion sense or style)
  • What they are known to you for (or what they are famous for)
  • What is unique or interesting about them
About places
What are some interesting or special places you know of? You can write about a place you have been to, or a place you haven’t been to but want to go to. It can be a place in Japan, or a place in another country. It can be a local place, a historical (歴史的) place, or a famous place – or a place that has all of these things. When you write about a place, include this information:
  • Where it is
  • What is special about it (to you)
  • What special things are there (mountains, famous buildings, and so on)
  • How to get there
You can look at the pictures again in the blogposts about describing and characterizing people, and the one about describing places. They can help you with your writing. 

Deadline (締め切り)
There will be two (2) deadlines - June 16th (6/16) for a rough draft (下書き), and June 23rd (6/23) for the final version. 

So, please send me your rough draft for review and individual comments by 6/16, and then, a final version by 6/23. 

Before that time, if you need any advice or guidance, message me anytime.

Good luck! I look forward to reading your great writing about people or places!


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Tuesday, May 7, 2019

Writing English A: Writing assignment 1・作文1

Hello!



How are you? Today I will show you our 1st writing assignment (作文1) - writing a comparison and contrast (比較対照) short composition about unique people or places.



You have two (2) choices for themes (テーマ) . Choose one (1) of them.

1. Compare (比べる) two (2) different people to each other. 

In this topic, compare two different people – it could be the personalities of some people you know, such as a brother to a sister, or our mother and your father. 

It could also be about two different people you know outside your family who may have the same jobs, or have had the same impact on your lives, like two teachers who had an impact on you, or two friends, coaches, or other people who have been big in your lives. But it could also be two famous people you think are unique, interesting, or special, like two singers, musicians, actors, athletes, writers, artists, or scientists.


I will gather your writing on this topic into The Small Book of Big People book I have talked about in class. 

2. Compare two (2) places to each other. 

In this topic, compare two different places that you know about, and may mean a lot to you – two different schools, or other kinds of places from your childhood. It could also be about two different cities or towns – maybe places you know, but also places you have never been to but would like to go to, maybe even live in someday. 

I am gathering writing on this topic into the Places & Traces book I have also talked about in class. 

For this topic, you can use the pictures from my blog that I posted about places and homes, or you can find your own pictures and write about them.

NEW - 3. Writing about one (1) person or one (1) place.

If you feel that writing comparison-contrast might be a little too difficult, I can give the choice for you to write about one person, or one place. 

How much to write
I would like you to write as much as you can, because your work may be published (出版した) on both this blog and in The Small Book of Big People book I talked about in class. 

I have another book of student writing I am putting together called Places & Traces - a collection of student writing about unique and interesting places. If you choose to write about places, your work could also go into this book too!

I would like to see maybe 2-3 paragraphs' worth of writing at least, though I would like for you to try for more - maybe 4 paragraphs if you can. 

Deadline (締め切り)
It will be May 22nd (5/22). I want you to bring in a first draft (下書き) next week (5/15) in your notebooks in pencil. We will then review our work with each other and you can change things about the draft as you need to. Then you can write to the finish outside of class on a Word document and turn in your work on 5/22. 

I will let you know about how you can hand in your work - either in hard copy form, printed out, or uploaded to a Google Doc or some other shared form online (I will let you know on 5/15). 

NEW - Here are the board notes for our classes today (5/8):



Good luck with this! I hope you can have fun with this, and enjoy writing about people who are special and unique to you, or places that you have a great feeling for. 

See you next time!



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Wednesday, January 17, 2018

特別ポスト: The Small Book of Big People (Part 2)

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How are you? This is a special post on a collection of writing by students I have been gathering up over time about the special and unique people they have known or admired in their lives. It's called The Small Book of Big People.

You will see that this says "Part 2." Part 1 I uploaded back in 2015 - I have been that busy in getting back to this! You can check it out at this link here.

Here is one gathering of this writing from your classes that I'm adding to the collection. Read these and write a short comment in the comments section of this blog on what you most like or enjoy.

So check these out!

A great person for me

I have a special person and that person is my mother. She is the most important for my life. I would like to write about her and tell you how great she is because I want you to know her.

My parents divorced when I was ten years old. I don’t have father and I’m just my mother’s son. I think my father has never existed. You might be sad to hear about that. But that I have only one parent has never made me sad, because I have been loved by my mother and she is a good mother. There are two reasons I think so.

I have an older sister. She is more intelligent than me, and my mother I think know that. For example, my sister was graduated from high school with honors. On the other hand, I was graduated from school with a bad grade. If a general mother heard that, she would say you are a bad child, or you are a trouble-maker.  However, she has never compared my sister and me, and she often said just the way you are. Then I felt I was not alone. That is one reason why I think my sister is a good mother. I still keep the phrase in my mind.

The other reason is my mother allowed me to do what I wanted to do. She is not a lawyer, and she is not a doctor. In short, my family is not wealthy. But when I wanted to play the guitar, she bought me a guitar. In addition, when I wanted to go on to university, she said you don’t have to take account of money to go on to university, and all you have to do is to prepare for the entrance examination. The phrases encouraged me to study hard and I appreciated the phrases and her.

Some Japanese people hesitate to say they love their mother and some are ashamed of saying that. But I don’t hesitate and I am not ashamed, because my mother is not only a good mother but also a great person. That is true. Why shouldn’t I do so? What stops me? The answer is nothing. I love my mother and I’m proud of her. In the future, I want to be a man like her.

A great piece of writing! Our family members are indeed important. But there are other people in our lives who are important as well. Let's take a look at this one: 


Memory of mine

I’m going to tell and share one of my memories. This memory is kind of a milestone. Well, I’d like to talk about someone who did change my life, whom I owe what I have been now.

When I was fourteen years old and a second grader in junior high school, I was in really a bad place, in other words, I was in a bad situation with everything; friends, club activities, teachers, many things. One day, the English teacher asked me to join the English speech contest. When I heard of this for the first time, I was confused, but I decided to join it. At that time, I thought to join something like this kind of event would make me have confidence more. Then I met the other teacher, Nick. He was a guy from the United States. He worked at my junior high school as an ALT. He is the one who changed me, he is the one whom I owe what I have become now. Meeting him was one of my milestones, a big, the biggest milestone in my life. Let me tell you more about him.

Speaking of Nick, he did teach me not only English things; grammar and pronunciation, but also the importance of studying English, how nice to have a lot of experiences, studying abroad, go abroad, and so on. In case of Nick, he came to Japan as an exchange student when he was in university. He said going somewhere while you are young is so nice. I totally agree with his idea. In addition, he told me that broading my horiozons is awesome. Talking with him, being taught English by him, everything was the worth for me. His story, his background made me want to improve my English, study more! I liked the story of his background, for instance, studying in Japan when he was young, how nice and fun studying other foreign languages is. When I talked to him, I always felt good, comfortable. With his guidance, I could get the first prize at the speech contest. By the way my speech title was “My Dream”. At that time, age at fourteen, I wanted to be a saxophonist. I was a member of the brass band club. I was extremely happy when my name called as a first prizer. I got speechless at that moment. I was too nervous to be calm. That was the best day ever.

So, I do owe who I have become to him. If I had not met him at that time, age fourteen, I think I would have become a different person. Ever since, I’ve kept having a great relationship with everyone, friends, teachers, people all over the world. Meeting someone who can change the other people is great, I guess. Therefore, meeting Nick was a milestone, he is the best teacher I have ever met in my life, and this is one of my memories.

That was a great one! Now look at this next one - sometimes, the influential people in our lives are those we haven't met yet, but are there:

My favorite person

Hi. Do you like to listen to music? What do you usually listen to? I like to listen to all kind of music so much. So I have many favorite singer and composer, but today I will tell you about my favorite person. His name is Alan Menken. Do you know him? Maybe some people knows him as Disney film music composer.

In 1949, he was born in New York. He has liked music since he was a little kid, and he has been learning about classical music. After graduating from college, he taught that he wants to become a composer for music director of the stage. In 1979, he offered the musical. Its name is w; God Bless You, Mr. Rosewater, and it is the work for the first time for him, but it was not a great box-office success. He learns from this experience to make more good one. In 1982, he was in the limelight for Little Shop of Horrors, and finally his song which he writes music became the theme song for this stage nominated for a Grammy. Then maybe you know. The movie was showing in 1989. It is The Little Mermaid. He was nominated for the Golden Globe Award and won four.

In my opinion he is a very good person. It is because he tried again and again, and above all the song which he wrote makes many people moving and exciting. Certainly me too! When I was in high school student I sung his song at school festival. Everyone knows it so that really became lively. Then he is still writing music for movie. Not only it, attraction’s song in Tokyo Disney Resort too.


My favorite his song is "Compass of Your Heart." It is attraction’s, Sindbad’s Storybook Voyage, song. It is a song which he wrote it only it. When you visited to Tokyo Disney Sea, please ride it and listen to the song. You might be changed your view of the world like me.

Wow! Now here's another one!


My favorite guitarist

I have many hobbies. Listening to music, buying clothes and playing with friends. Especially my favorite thing is to play the guitar. It is the influence of someone that I liked the guitar. His name is John. Thanks to him I was able to like guitar.

John isn't form a band, and not release a CD. He will never appear on TV programs. Why? Because, he is an internet guitarist. He posts performance videos playing the guitar. I was shocked by watching his videos. I thought "It's really cool!" I bought a guitar soon after a few days later. It's the same model as him. Knowing John, I started to like guitar. John's guitar playing is very cool, polite and sometimes powerful. There are lots of guitarists in the world with amazing technique. For example, it's faster to play, strange sound. But John is different. He doesn't do difficult things and plays a very simple phrase. It's actually fresh, and mainly, easy to hear. Perhaps, he can also be difficult. That makes me feel very good. His charm is other than playing the guitar. That is his character. He is often doing live streaming of videos. I originally had a sober and dark personality. So, I thought we were similar. But, John turns into a different person when playing the guitar. That's very amazing!


That John played live last August. Members are bass players, drummers and vocalists active on the Internet. He seldom plays live. So I took a ticket soon to go see the live. I arrived at the stage. There were more people than I thought. I was feeling tense and fun. Large music flow on the stage. At the same time band members will enter, and I could see John. He looked somewhat unconfident. And after all he is sober. The bass plays the phrase and song starts, and John plays the guitar. I was surprised and very excited, because he moved the body greatly and shook his head! He looks like a different person a while ago. At the end happy and I can not move, but this is still the first song! The live was 12, 13 songs in all. I enjoyed live more than ever. After the live, I decided to speak to John. But there were lots of people and I didn't have time so I couldn't do it. It was sad. But there is still a chance! John is playing live this September. I'll go to it and will talk to John this time! 

I hope you could enjoy just this small sample of writing from your classes! I'm only sorry I can't upload them all because there are so many good ones. 

Have fun with these! Please comment on what you think of them. Short comments are okay. 


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